Thursday, February 20, 2014

Research Proposal

Research Proposal
Cami Robison

Advertising controls what Americans want to bring into their home, purchase for their kids, feed their families, and most people don't even realize it. Many documentaries are being made to analyze how advertising companies play our emotions and appeal to consumers to make us more inclined to buy something, even if it is unhealthy for us. Advertising agencies are using deceiving tactics and are determined to suck consumer’s dry of money without considering the long term effects and health for their customers. This project will look at the pros and cons of advertising and how it is being used today to lure people into buying products. What methods of appeal are being used to make consumers more inclined to buy a product? How are advertisements affecting people negatively? What is the effect of advertising on our youth and is that the intentions of advertising agencies? Advertising agencies are steering consumers into making bad purchases and are steering Americans towards unhealthy habits and lifestyles.
                Sources reviewed so far include "Generic Product Advertising, Spillovers, and Market Concentration" by George Norman, from Journal of Agricultural Economics. This article provides evidence that products that are in high demand are not necessarily high quality products, but are products that are being more advertised and beating out better products with less advertisement. Similarly, "Generic and Brand Advertising Strategies in a Dynamic Duopoly" by Frank Bass explains how advertising generic products and then over advertising a brand name product puts the products in demand and then makes consumers want to buy the name brand product which is viewed as higher quality. Todd Schmitt wrote an article called "Decomposing the Variation in Generic Advertising Response over Time" explaining that if you track sales history back over the years it shows that sales were through the roof when advertising was large on a certain product. He states that advertising controls how and what consumers spend their money on.  "Advertising Competition under Consumer Inertia" by Bibek, Banerjee looks into how consumers put their trust into an item depending on the level of advertising, and are more likely to make a second purchase and become a long term costumer even if they were unhappy with the outcome of the product. If advertisements say it is the best, consumers believe it is the best. Gerard Tellis wrote an article called "Optimal Data Interval for Estimating Advertising Response” that summarizes his findings when using a linear dynamic to show the rise in sales once a product has been advertised. Stating with support that consumers buy what they are told to buy. An article called "Under the Radar: Smokeless Tobacco Advertising in Magazines With Substantial Youth Readership" was written by Margret Morrison, depicting how tobacco companies use advertising to target young kids by placing them in magazines with high readership of teens. Similarly, Simone Pettigrew and his colleagues wrote an article called “Introducing and Applying a new Australian Alcohol Advertising Code” explaining how Australia has put together a review board to look over advertisements before publishing them to bring down the level of targeting children. Although with this they have found advertisements are implying through context versus stating outright what they want to say. An article called “Youth Attitudes towards Advertisements Depicting Nudity and Alcohol: Ethical Dilemmas in Advertising.” By Dorah Dubihlela, elaborating on the importance of advertising ethics and noting how many and almost all advertising agencies are dishonest and manipulative. More long term customers will be made if advertisements were honest and trustworthy rather than fooling consumers into buying a faulty product repeatedly. “Point of Sale Tobacco Advertising Following a National Advertising Ban” by Allison Myers is a study showing that 62% of companies kept their tobacco advertisements on the external of their establishment even after a nationwide ban. And 7 percent had actual brand photos on them. Veronica Thomas wrote an article called “Conceptualizing and Exploration of Attitude toward Advertising Disclosures and Its Impact on Perceptions of Manipulative Intent” depicting how advertising agencies are using all manipulation to get a positive attitude towards a product from a consumer, regardless of the quality of the product. This was published in The Journal of consumer Affairs.
In addition to the sources I've collected so far, I would like to collect information from documentaries on the forms of advertising to help broaden my sources and provide a visual aid. I have collected many peer-reviewed sources from Ebsco Host that has helped further my argument. While Ebsco Host has provided me with many sources on alcohol and tobacco advertising, I need to find sources that look more into the advertising method overall, and to do this I plan to use JSTOR which seems to provide sources on a broader level. I would love to find a source that goes into the detail of product placement in stores to be able to reference and show how advertisers are not just using billboards and commercials to manipulate consumers but the placement of an item in stores as well. I plan to do some field research by going to a grocery store and really paying attention to what I see and what pulls me in.
This week I am going to use different data bases to find any additional sources that may be able to contribute to my paper. I plan to have an outline for my research paper ready by the 21st so I can start writing within the next week. I will have my annotated bibliography don't by the 21st as well. By week seven I will have a rough draft put together of my paper for me to work on and elaborate and perfect my use of sources. Also, I will have completed my literature review. by week eight I will have my outline, rationale, and abstract ready to submit, and have my peers and helpers in the writing lab review my paper so I can make changes if necessary. By week ten I will have my final draft completed and ready to submit
Cited sources
Norman, George. "Generic Product Advertising, Spillovers, and Market Concentration." American Journal of Agricultural Economics 90.3 (2008): 719-732. JSTOR. 5 Feb. 2014.
This article is examining the choice to advertise goods and shows that even inefficient products are in demand over higher quality products that are less advertised. Showing that advertisement makes the difference between sales in a product. if consumers are told its quality it becomes a best seller. I will use this source to show the severity of how advertising impacts consumers.
Bass, Frank M. "Generic and Brand Advertising Strategies in a Dynamic Duopoly." Marketing Science 24.4 (2005): 556-568. JSTOR. 5 Feb. 2014.
This article explains the difference of advertising brand versus generic products and how much of each is necessary. Generic advertising must be done to spike the demand for a product and brand advertising is used to execute the best brand to be purchased, I will use this source as an example of how advertising companies are appealing to consumers’ needs by manipulating them.
Schmit, Todd M. "Decomposing the Variation in Generic Advertising Response over Time." American Journal of Agricultural Economics 86.1 (2004): 139-153. JSTOR. 6 Feb. 2014.
This article has tracked food spending patterns over the last few years and has found that it all changes according to focus of advertisement, switching the demand for different brands of cheeses depending on the brand most advertised that year. I will use this to explain how these patterns are showing that advertising agencies are controlling consumers.
Banerjee, Bibek. "Advertising Competition under Consumer Inertia" Marketing Science 22.1 (2003): 131-144. JSTOR. 6 Feb. 2014.
This article looks into the likelihood of a consumer to repeat a purchase even if unhappy with results or a raised price solely based on the advertising of the product. This is done by persuading the buyer that the brand has value. I plan to use this source to demonstrate how consumers aren't aware that they are being manipulated.
Tellis, Gerard J. "Optimal Data Interval for Estimating Advertising Response." Marketing Science 25.3 (2006): 217-229. JSTOR. 7 Feb. 2014.
This article finds data that links sales with current and past advertising showing the rise in sales once advertised. a linear dynamic is used to ensure the accuracy of the data. I will use this source to show statistical support to my claim towards advertisements.
Morrison, Margret A. "Under the Radar: Smokeless Tobacco Advertising in Magazines With Substantial Youth Readership" American Journal of Public Health 98.3 (2008): 543-584. JSTOR. 7 Feb. 2014.
This article explores the placement of vapor cigarette ads in magazines with a high youth readership. The placement of these ads is to target young kids to form lifelong tobacco customers. I will use this to my argument of placement of ads as a way of manipulating consumers.
Pettigrew, Simone, Johnson, Rebecca, Daube, Mike. “Introducing and Applying a new Australian Alcohol Advertising Code.” Journal of Public Affairs 13.1 (2013): 72-83. EBSCO HOST. 7 Feb. 2014.
This article explains that a review board has been made for Advertisements in Australia to try and help censor the different targets of ads depicting alcohol, tobacco, and more unhealthy products. They are finding that advertising agencies are becoming sneakier in publishing ads that imply certain things but do not say them outright. Advertisements are beginning to focus on context so they cannot be bashed for their content. I will use this in my paper to show how people don’t catch the way advertisements target young kids.
Dubihlela, Dorah. “Youth Attitudes towards Advertisements Depicting Nudity and Alcohol: Ethical Dilemmas in Advertising.” South African Journal of Phycology 41.2 (2011): 207-217. EBSCO HOST. 8 Feb. 2014.
This article discusses the importance of advertising ethics and building a business people can trust. Majority of businesses have no morality and are giant money making agencies that aren’t concerned about obtaining a long term customer through honesty and quality product, but by depicting inappropriate context for alcohol and nudity to target kids into forming habits at a young age. I will use this source in my paper to support my claim of unhealthy companies attempting and succeeding to lure kids into unhealthy addictions.
Myers, Allison E. “Point of Sale Tobacco Advertising Following a National Advertising Ban.” Public Health 13.5 (2013): 534-540. EBSCO HOST. 8 Feb. 2014.
This article reviews a study of Tobacco advertising after a national ban on advertising. It shows that 62% of retail outlets still displayed tobacco advertisements on their exterior store. I will use this source to provide statistical evidence towards my claim.
Thomas, Veronica L. “Conceptualizing and Exploration of Attitude toward Advertising Disclosures and Its Impact on Perceptions of Manipulative Intent.” The Journal of Consumer Affairs 10.1 (2013): 564-587. EBSCO HOST. 8 Feb. 2014.

This article explains how advertising disclosures are meant to manipulate consumers into a certain attitude to change their perception of a product. It includes diagrams and statistics on the matter although it has been studied little. This source looks into the depth of advertising disclosures. I will use this source to demonstrate the manipulative intent of advertising agencies and also use evidence to support my claim. 

Thursday, February 13, 2014

Chapter 16 Discussion

This chapter starts off discussing how to decide what style to use in your research paper. it suggests figuring this out by reading other works that follow the same topic that you are writing about. do not over word things or people will find it too complicated to read, and wont read it. Avoid using unnecessary words that take up space. Do not use unnecessary introductory phrases. use active and passive voice correctly. decide your consistent point of view and stick to it. you cannot use I in your research paper. Use specialized language when necessary, do not use jargon if people will not understand or if it is not heavily used in the conversation. you want to keep your paper interesting by changing up your sentence structure and word type. also you want to vary your length of structure and sentence. transition well in your paper and use the right phrases. Avoid sexist language, which is something that will be important for my paper because it is on gay rights and unions. Reading on your topic will help you expand.

Friday, January 31, 2014

Chapter 11 Discussin

This chapter is all about developing a good thesis statement. first you begin with your position on your statement and work from there. you will use your answer from your research question to polish a thesis statement declaring your position on the subject. this is the most important argument and idea you will present in your paper, its what your paper is about! After reviewing all of your notes to decide your main focus point, you consider your purpose and main point of your writing. after this you need to focus your thesis statement to make sure it is well polished and serves its purpose.

Chapter 10 Discussion

This chapter is all about field research. it teaches you how to know when to use field research and how to get it. interviews are a good way to collect information and provides firsthand accounts of an event. it is explained that you may not need an interview to help your paper but it is a good source. Observation is another additive you can use in your paper, but this is more narrow of a tool because it does not apply to everything and cannot always be useful. lastly, this chapter goes over the use of public events such as lectures and more to gain information about your topic.

Thursday, January 30, 2014

Chapter 7 Discussion

Plagiarism is often a mistake of failing to site sources correctly. you want your readers to understand what ideas are yours and which ones come from your sources. paraphrases are also needing to be cited accurately or they will be considered plagiarism. intentional plagiarism is passing off others work as your own. even closely related writing can be considered plagiarism. to avoid plagiarism hassle make sure to cite sources correctly! also, take notes carefully to ensure you don't think a quote you wrote down is something you thought up on your own. There are many reasons why writers may feel the need to plagiarize, but none of them are acceptable.

Chapter 6 Discussion

This chapter teaches you how to organize all the information that you have found. this goes into detail about printed information and digital information. it teaches how to categorize information that is useful and will be useful later in the process. It goes in depth in explaining how to save things on your computer and even you iPhone if that is where you are taking your notes from. Note taking is also discussed in this chapter. How to take notes correctly and also how to store them. Your note taking affects the focus on your paper and how you form and produce your arguments. When taking notes you need to decide one way you want to do it and use that method consistently. Use direct quotes from the text you are taking notes from, this can become difficult to add to your paper so refer to where you got the quote to be able to look back and include it in your paper. Summarizing what you've read is also important, so you can get a general feel for what the source is about if you need a reference of its nature later. Record your reactions to the sources, so you can build off of those in your paper. what surprises you might surprise others. also, you are going to want to compare sources to one another. /this chapter also goes in depth about creating an annotated bibliography.

Chapter 3 Discussion

Developing a research question and proposal is what this chapter is about. to begin to develop your question you need to reflect on your writing situation. your thoughts about your topic as you've looked further in will change and develop, so ask yourself what and why. generating questions requires you to look at your history, the information you've already gathered, goals of the topic, ect. form research questions based on these things. after this, decide on one question that you think will help you achieve your purpose in your writing the best. Narrowing the scope of your research question to allow it to fit into your essay is helpful, you want to focus your question to be able to form a response. a research proposal is a formal presentation of plan for writing your entire paper. this goes in to detail on how to accomplish this accurately and successfully with everything you need to include.